Comments : Paths to friendship

  • 10 years ago

    by Cyma Khan

    This is really beautiful poem...shows gr8 friendship....Good work!!!

    God bless u

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    The poem its self wasnt really all that speacial. i mean the flow was off a little.But at the end,your little "not" to Nazeer that had real raw emotion and was the most captivating eye opening part of it, sorry to be negative, but its true, 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Hebe

    A short poem.
    The words are telling about a deep friendship.
    I didn't really catch the flow, but the discription of the emotions makes up for it.
    In short: a nice piece of writing
    Take care

  • 10 years ago

    by STEVE

    A very deep and meaningful write I do hope your friendship lasts a lifetime because friends are forever 5/5 Steve

  • 10 years ago

    by Dead Is The New Alive

    Good read no wonder nazeer told me to read it
    _forever carly_

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    The smiles I share on you never ever dies..

    i have read all of your poem. it was amazing. your choices of words are great. i liked also you way of writing style

    We shall remain as friends forever and forever..

    "forever and forever" if it would be always and forever then that ws better.

    but again its your own choice your own feelings.
    and i respect your feelings.
    keep it up great work
    i am giving you 5/5
    take care

  • 10 years ago

    by Melpomene

    This I must say is quite a beautiful poem. The dedication to someone was outstanding and your word choice strong and powerful showing emotions of kindness love and friendship. You really didn't need any advice so to say from me you pulled of this poem greatly. It was a sweet and caring poem for someone who obviously means so much to you. Well done a good piece of poetry you have written here.~mel

  • 10 years ago

    by GretaInsideOut

    Interesting poem, nice to see some compassion between you both.

    Greta

  • 10 years ago

    by jazmine

    A wonderful poem..though it was a little bit flawless...but in the end it holds a true meaning of friendship..keep it up =]

  • 10 years ago

    by Mary Rose

    Friends are those who need 2 be cherished and kept... luv ur poem... =)

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ThiS remindS mE oF onE mY besT friendS- -gooD joB!

  • 10 years ago

    by Natalie

    I loved this poem, because it shows the true meaning of friendship and you only needed a few strong words can show what a person thinks of another. i wish i had that great of a friend.

    hope it last forever.
    chatty

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    A shorT buT beautifuL piecE 5/5 brilliantlY penneD. keeP writinG!

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    This pieve was absolutely an outstanding one. Your creativity is captivating...never a dull in writing and never dull in reading...

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    ThaT iS sucH aN excellenT poeM, i lovE youR worK!!

    - luzaN

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    YouR stylE oF writinG iS aN enjoyablE topiC. aN excellenT piecE oF worK thaT attracteD mY sinceritY verY mucH...

    thiS iS luzaN froM NZ

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Omgsh this is so good ! i'd love your poems..

    Nazeer

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    Writing pleasure from you and the reading joy is from my end... be my creme guest cos I like your style of writing...

    Nazeer

  • 10 years ago

    by Shirani Graham

    This is a great poem, definately used good expressions. well done!

    Nazeer