Comments : What I Believe

  • 16 years ago

    by Alma

    Hmmm.. your belief that you are giving everything to one person. I lykd how u explain wat it is to give everything to someone to offer yourself to someone.
    loved it! 5/5
    a beautiful piece of poetry

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie

    "With love and passion; Truth.
    With emotions and blissfully bliss.
    I'll give you my heart; Ever So,
    To wish; Pray, you take of this."

    Sam,

    Gah!! That was beautiful. I'm envious. You truly have a way with words... :] You should def. win the club contest with this one. 5.5 Fantastic job on this one. Iloveit.

    - Steph <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Tenebrous

    Great Poem. Very lovely. 5

  • 16 years ago

    by HaileyHelen

    Awwwwwwwww how cute <3ed it!

  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal

    I don't if I showed be jealous of your way with words, or your incredible devotion. I love it.
    :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Taz

    Wow ur poem was sweet and really nice
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by the simple girl

    Truly amazing. You have a way of writing in a way that sounds memorizing. You have a true talent, something other people would die for. Keep up the great work.

    ~Ashley

  • 16 years ago

    by WiNgS Of StEeL

    U have an amazing poem right here!!
    and i just loved it:D
    u hv a wonderful way with words
    keep it up
    tk care
    breex

  • 16 years ago

    by Arun Khan

    The idea is good, and the writing is fine.. but somewhere you didnt pull it off, try and play with the words abit more, dont be afraid of writing more.. dont get me wrong your a good writer and I liked it, but something is missing.. 3 / 5
    God bless
    Arun

  • 16 years ago

    by So Wrong its Right

    Excellent writing, but I didn't feel a lot of flow and rythym. Maybe it's just me. But it had nice depth.

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    Great job...once agian...

  • 16 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Cool...a different style of writing, I like that, keep up the gud work...^^