Beautiful poem, very descriptive and captivating.
I like every line, the whole piece is simply wonderful.
5/5

Awesome penned, though simply, but meaningful, very inspirations written...."Remember that not getting what you want is sometimes a stroke of luck. Judge your success by what you had to give up in order to get it."

Best wishes, Bert.

You have a neat poem here and many thanks for the comment! I'll check more of your work as I go along and I hope you will do the same! 5/5

What a beautiful poem. It has such a peacefulness to it.

that sanctuary,
that salvation,
that this feeling,
that this moment,
is the rainbow
of life itself.

Thes lines can't help but make you feel good inside.
Excellent job!
Take care Cindy

Very beautiful as it is written well and the flows is great. The poem is very lucid in meaning and also metaphorical. Thats really great and worth 5/5. plse rrc my poem English for the confused. tc

"is the rainbow
of life itself."
^^^Wow, such a beautiful ending. I love your inspirational pieces. And this one is no exception, such a peaceful feel to this poem. Very beautifully worded, Gary.

Very beautiful and deep....love the images of the clouds, storm and rainbow....love the last verse.....

After the rain,
these gray eyes
see with fresh clarity
and realize
that sanctuary,
that salvation,
that this feeling,
that this moment,
is the rainbow
of life itself.

Beautiful.....

I do love the outstanding metaphors and the blending of imagery in this poem.