Comments : Mindslaver

  • 10 years ago

    by unknown

    Wow.. Your choice of words are impressive.
    There are some words i don't know and make me to open the dictionary. hahaa..
    It's short but powerful.
    Nice poem. :)

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    Great choice of words, it was short
    and very powerful
    i thought it was
    very nice

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Debbie

    How uncanny. How you've weaved your words in such a classy manner, along with a wistful and reflective ambiance, but by way of a veiled meaning, have awfully charmed me. Nice use of assonance and internal rhymes, whereas I still have to decipher what's in between the lines. Take care. ~Marian

  • 10 years ago

    by .K.i.T.t.Y.

    Hmm. There is so much to this poem. Too much, that I probably couldn't pick all of it out just because I am sort of out there in space.

    This poem had nice wording, structure, and depth.

    Nice work.

    5/5.

  • 10 years ago

    by Cassandra

    This poem is truly unique and mind-boggling. You've accomplished to create a writting that is deep and clever in few words. Beautiful rhymes and flow! Amazing! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    I love your unique format. I did not have to read a sea of words to catch your depth yet I could ponder for days

  • 10 years ago

    by StormyStar

    I love how you have your very own style of writting its very nice.. and i love your format you chose.. you are very talented and i hope to keep reading your poems.. keep up the good work.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    Smooth and unique! 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow dude, fleeting image what a view that you put out,
    today after a while i read a poem by you, and what i found is that, now you are one of those writiers, who improved 100 % since the moment i read ur first poem here... now your poetry techniced are something that other poetry lovers should check out to learn from it, you have mastered what it takes to be called a POET with all quality. I am so glad that i read this poem of you.keep in touch.

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Short and sweet its really metaphorical and the metaphores are really nice. Keep up the good work

  • 10 years ago

    by Boy

    It was short but very meaningfull, and aggressive. speicaly realy good choice of words. that was your great job.

    i felt thatyou have geat talent. you should keep it up. and i alwasy like reading such a nice and sweet poems.
    very aggressive

    your words forced me to give you 5/5

    so i an giving you 5/5

    takecare

  • 10 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    THat was a pretty short poem, but
    there was so much meaning
    in the words
    great choice of words by
    the way. But i likeed it
    so a well deserved

    5/5 from me

  • 10 years ago

    by Grey Ajurahck

    This is simple yet has an underlaying deepness to it, open to many interpretations. I love your use of language. A great piece.

  • 10 years ago

    by Gary Jurechka

    This is a great piece, short but deep and with many meanings. I like the style it's wrote in and the excellent use of language. Excellent poem!

    Peace, Poetry & Power,

    Gary Jurechka

  • 10 years ago

    by Fsams

    Beautiful and metaphorical, shor and sweet. I like the imagery and your style of writing. Very creativea nd worth 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by Krysten

    Again great, but also again had to read it aloud before i found its meaning. and again a new pretty unwritten topic....but i did enjoy it. so please keep up the good work....

  • 10 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Your voacabulary is impressive.
    I love how you weaved your words, it really made me think.
    It flowed amazingly, making for an excellent read.
    Much enjoyed,
    Elaine.

  • 10 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    I think it's cool. I like it. Your poems are so short. That's not a bad thing though I'm just use to reading and writing longer things. I give you a five as usual. By the way thank you soooo much for checking out Thoughs of the Mindless.

  • 10 years ago

    by Ashleigh Skye

    I"m sorry that it took me so long to finally comment on this poem but it took me a while to understand it, even still I'm having a little bit of trouble. I really liked the way that it was written though very different. You have a way with free verse poems where it just comes naturally to you. Well done.

  • 10 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Although the poem was short I found it to be very well written, the imagery was amazing and so was the word choice. The flow grabs the reader and doesn't let them go, fantastic job with this piece 5/5 GG23