Comments : Always and Forever [Triolet]

  • 16 years ago

    by Loved In Hell

    This is amazing very good job true feeling was placed in this poem and i can relate
    5/5

    laura

  • 16 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This was really amazing!!I can relate to it very well!!short indeed but really powerfull!!!
    All the best
    And take care.

  • 16 years ago

    by Roxiee An

    Being concise was good liked it 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Again, this flowed so well and the style was pne i loved, and you carried it off exceptionally well.
    keep writing
    love Tara-Kay
    xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought that it was
    truly a good poem
    a nice tiolot(how ever you spell it)lol
    i liked the flow
    and the repition was very good
    nice work

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Greatly penned lines, I like this whole piece, from the beginning to the end.
    I usually don't read friendship poetry, but I really like this piece.
    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    This a great Triolet that reflects the enduring joy of the togetherness of lovers

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Interesting I like your wording. It is short but greatly written. Excellent job, first line is amazing and I like form of poem very much.
    5/5 keep up.

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany C

    Beautifuly writen poem. Great word choice and it had a very nice flow to it. I gave it a 5/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by StormyStar

    Your emotion was really good in this poem.. i love your words.. lol and your style. in this one again. lol

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nice job on this form. Beautiful!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    You're really good at Tioloet style. Good job, flow was flawless, good choice of words I really enjoyed reading this one. keep writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by lisa

    Love the style,love the use of words,loved the poem!!well done!!!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nikki

    I loved it, you so good at triolet's, it was beautifully written. your words are amazing. great work 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Amy

    This poem is so beautiful, I love reading it! I love the style too!