I almost went to heaven
"Before I was a saint
We almost painted a masterpiece
Before we learned to paint"

These were my favorite lines.I loved this poem.Great job.
Kelsie

This poem is amazing! I loved the style of it..i cant explain it...like how it was about 'we' and how you ALMOST did this and that...that probably doesnt make sense. lol. But i really liked it. Awesome flow too. Keep it up. Xx Chrissie

I loved the flow and word choice in this poem it was excellent. I love the meaning behind the poem and I love the way you describe almost, It's like we always want to rush things and we never take the time to really see all we have. Amazing poem 5/5 GG23

Awesome penned, though simply but writing well within beautiful emotions........Bert.

I almost fell in love once
You know I almost cried
I was almost born
Before I almost died

My fave stanza ^^

Simple but good. The word choice was good too. Keep up the good work!

Wow, amazing poem! I like it from the beginning to the end, and every stanza is excellently written, but my absolute favorite is:
-I almost fell in love once
You know I almost cried
I was almost born
Before I almost died-
^breath- taking.
Great job, you're so talented!
5/5 from me

Awesome, loved it, really interesting, good word choice. Loved it!
You are a talented poet!
:)
Kara

Omg, this almost made me to write another poem,lol.
as always this was another great poem by you. what i love about ur works are they are not just a poem but in each poem you teach ur readers a lesson and it depend on the reader to take advantage of it. this was another great one sir...

Purely Amazing.
This 'work-of-art' has incredible style and structure combined with inspirational rhymes. Its Beautiful.
You are truly a poet to look up to.

"I was almost born
Before I almost died"

^^these lines completely blew my mind.

5/5!

Wow man, this is pretty sweet.
i really like the last line, it has a resounding sort of, brainchild effect on things that "almost" were.

good write.

Tom.

Great poem.
I really enjoyed reading it.
Take care

Your style of writing is clear.concise, beautiful to read and enjoy. Thanks for your contribution to the world of poetry.

Great poem with strong overflow of feelings. 5/5 all the way

Wow I am speechless. That was excellent, I enjoyed it a lot. Made me want to read some more of your poetry, which were also very good.
Keep up the good work!!

Wow this is really creative and great choice of words this is like a song by "bowling for soup" called 'almost' even though its a lot alike u made urs unique good job

laura

I must say this was such a creative beautiful piece of work. I really have no idea how to express how this poem made me feel within my emotions. The line "I almost painted a masterpiece, Before we learned to paint" Really hit my heart so strong and powerful. I must say this was stunning. An elegant piece which was created with simplicity yet had a whole new meaning behind its sweet beauty. Well done on writing this. ~mel

I have to say you have such a talent with your writing, i loved it, the picture you brought to my mind was so strong. it was so strong and powerful. the flow was great, the structure i loved. 5/5

I thought this was really cute.. Short but sweet. I actucally found no fault with this.. Flawless.. Very good.. 5/5

This is so amazingly beautiful.
i love how everything -almost- happened. you have such a way with words, in three stnzas, this was deeper than a lot of the poems ive read lately.
grea job!
5/5

~Sandra

Yay this is different from a lot of love poems!!! good job! 5/5