Wow, i thought that was
another great poem by
you, but ehat happended
to you giving up on writing
for a while, lol, any way.
i loved the way that it
flowed and the rhyming
was great, everything
was perfect and it
was just flawless
This is one of the best poems I've ever read. I'm definitely adding it to my favorites. It's has so much emotion in it, it almost made me cry and I really never cry over anything. It made me remember everything that had happened to me and how I let people get to me when I shouldn've cared and everything like that. And I think that you should definitely keep writing and expressing yourself this way, and I'm sorry that no one in your life outside of here believes in you.But you write amazing poetry so who cares. Amazing poem.
Great poem, very deep and u used strong words... its going in meh favs =D xD
my fav parts the part with we all in up in the ground... ya that part really stuck out as the strongest part...
keep it up!!!! =D 5/5
Today I was having a bad day and I ran across this poem in my favorites and I read it and just kept reading it then I looked through the comments and I saw that I'd posted 2 with the second one saying whenever I have a bad day I can read this and know that everything will be okay and this poem really does make me feel like everything will be okay. It makes you think about how you're better than everyone else and you will continue to be better than everyone else and that you are fine just by yourself and that you can do anything and make it!
This is such an amazing poem like wow it's so expressive and really make you think as you can tell from everything I've written above! lol
But it's just so good and nice job!!!