Wow very powerful language use in this poem, keep it up xxx

I like ur poem and thanks for commenting on my poem it maeds a lot

5/5

Actually i nice version of my poem..this was another lovely poem on how you describe your feeling using symbols were great and imaginative..smooth flow too.

I think this is one of the best I've read. The elegant choice of words and deepness of each line. Soul captivating and very intimidating.

Flying away on delicate innocence,

To the dark where it shall once and for all

Be torn apart,

And I shall love No More.

I liked this part very much.

It is hard to read this poem, you could write this piece in stanzas then it will be easier to read. Anyway this is great poem, atmosphere is incredible and some lines are very powerful. You described emotions excellently and every line is touching. It deserves 5/5

So elegant and beautiful...great work!!!!!