Great choice of words, this piece is very effective.
Truly excellently written poem, with greatly expressed emotions.
Well done, 5/5.

It is excellent poem. Your wording is great and the atmosphere is amazing. Really good dark poem with great topic. 5/5 again very good.

Wow i really like your poem.. it rocked!!! for real.. i can totally relate cuz well yeah.. when you plan to stop.. some times you just get those BIG urges telling you to cuz your so used to it.. but you know that you shouldnt

I know how you feel.I just stopped cutting less than a year ago and I still find that I long to cut.That's what most of my poems are about.If you'd please check mine out I'd appreciate it.I love this poem.5/5
<3Amber

Beautiful! Wow, you captured the emotions EXACTLY the way I feel when I almost (and sometimes do) have a relapse. 5/5

Just like the recent poem you have created..it was lovely and sad. but i don't know i felt less emotion on this one..but still 5/5

This is awesome, really beautiful, really effective, especially when you made a line just one word.
love it
xxx
p.s dont cut =]

I can feel the intensity in it. I can picture the scene very much. Its like a person going insane lusting for blood. Liked it.

Wow.
this , truly is my favoruite poems.
the emotion was perfect,
and how you sometimes mad one word per line.
i love it.
i added it to my favourite poems?

x_____Trinity

_read my poems?

Wow! Aewsome poem! I love it! Lots of emotion and intensity....I'm trying to stop cutting and thats exactly how i feel...great job on this!!!!!!! 5/5 :)