Tear Stained Pillow.

by ABake   Jul 6, 2007


This morning she woke up to find a tear stained pillow.
Looked in the mirror to see red and swollen eyes.
Everyone slept peacefully last night,
And didn't pay attention to her cries.

This is the story of her life.
It consists of the same routine each day.
Put on a fake smile,
And make-up takes the redness away.

No one knows the pain,
That lies deep within.
Absolutely nothing will make her happy.
For happiness you can not win.

You can try, but her you will never please.
No matter how much of your attention you give.
She won't be satisfied.
She still won't want to live.

Parents who love her, friends who for her would die.
She has no real reason to be so unhappy.
But yet, to be happy she won't even try.

I'd like to say this girl is my best friend,
Or even a family member.
But sadly in the end,
This unhappy girl is I.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Miu

    Ehhh! Brilliant. I loved the ending, I was thinking of it middle of the poem, if it was yourself you are writing about, and you were. I can relate to this, so it just touched me. It flowed really good and easy to read, so the reader gets your message.
    5/5 Amazing work on this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    Thiss very good.
    but i don't understand
    why your unhappy??
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Blood Angel

    This poem is very well written if that alone could describe it. It's filled with emotion and feeling, perhaps one of the best poems I've read.
    Keep up the good work.
    ~BloodAngel

  • 16 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow, the ending really caught me by suprise. I wasn't expecting to find out that that girl is you. You did a great job with this one and I'm reallyliking your work. :)
    5/5
    Ciao<3

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    This is my favorite out of the three =) You have a good vocab in this poem, well done. I can't see anything wrong about this poem. Good job! It flowed nicely too.

    Keep up the good work!

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