Comments : I'm just too tired

  • 16 years ago

    by LifeThroughMyEyes

    I feel like this all of the time....i can really relate. great poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very beautiful with overflowing feelings and geat imagery. Well depicted meanings and well penned. 5/5 you deserve dear

    I'm tired of heartbreaks and loneliness
    and crying myself to sleep alone
    can I just let go of this life
    and slip away in the night
    and find my rest in the grave?

    My fav stock of stanzas
    Tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Rhi

    I can soo relate to this. It's such a beautiful poem.

  • 16 years ago

    by Elapsed

    When I read your work i feel an amazing talent which demands respect. Your poems bring comfort to so many, far and wide. I hope find the inner strength to carry on. Take care and I hope to see more poems from you soon!

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very mournful and heartfelt, I enjoyed every bit of this poem though it really affected my eyes(Saddened me). You have nicely described it with the right word choice and style. 5/5 all the way. Tc