Comments : Darkness

  • 16 years ago

    by King of Pain

    Brittney - I was very touched by your poem Darkness. My wife died after she took an overdose of pain killers last week and it reminded me of something she would write. You have an amazing talent for writing and I can tell you feel what you write. Please remember that you have a lot to give to this life. You are a very precious asset to this planet. Please stay with us. Ginoitall

  • 16 years ago

    by Kiss My Sass

    This is an awesome poem! It's so true. I have a friend who overdosed on sleeping pils. She just went to bed and never woke up. Please remember that you are more precious then that. My friend didn't remember that even if her family didn't love hero or need her, i did. Remember that for every person that hates you there are two more who love you :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Angel

    Wow!!! Fanastic poem.......brilliant picturisation, very well worded - i could vivdly imagine every part of the poem.....loved it!!! And i had a cousin who overdosed too - like jess said, she went to sleep and never woke up.......she didnt only kill herself,but her entire family..... but i could relate to the poem cos there are so many many times tat i want to just escape as well and my writing creates tat world for me.......i guess it does for u too.......... if u need to talk, u could always buzz me :) take care......

  • 16 years ago

    by xXAxTwistedxWishXx

    Amanzing...this is a really good poem. you described everythign so clear n vividely. i love you choice in words. and this poem was extremely moving

  • 16 years ago

    by unique

    This poem is really good.. If u ever need to talk u can send me a message.

  • 16 years ago

    by ViviCakes

    I have seen a few of your quotes and poems, you are a very talented writer. And your words are touching.

    Cakes

  • 16 years ago

    by Littl3Pickl369

    Wow, very touching, i loved it, alot of emotion, hope things are okay, and im here if ya need to talk:)
    <Niki3

  • 16 years ago

    by kia

    Very well written. I knew what you were talking about the whole way through. You use your words very beautifully. You made something dark and horrible sound picturesque and beautiful. Never thought of my times in that state of mind had such an element of unnatural beauty to them. Take care hun. Kia xoxo

  • 15 years ago

    by Angel

    My God!!! This poem is so brilliant!!!
    Perfect from start to end - brilliant imagery - i loved everythin bout it!!!!
    moreover, its almost like u've put words to wat i feel - wow!! simply superb!!

  • 15 years ago

    by Angel

    Oki - i think i commented twice :P