I love this part of your poem/song

"id ask you to feed me another lie
but im not hungry anymore
i'm not starving for you
i dont love you anymore"

It shows that you are moving on and learned a lesson. I hate reading poems or books where the characters know the person is bad for them and anyone close and instead of changing they settle for what they know isn't right. They don't learn and complain when bad things happen to them! Glad to know u aren't the same. lol

Beautiful poem, i loved it, i thought it was wonderful. great flow, wording, vocab, and definitely wonderfully written.

Excellent poem , well written and a nice flow, wonderful piece ,a the wording was great in it, marvelous job ,keep it up,,,,,,,,5/5

Sweet, a poetic song. haven't seen this before, great work

your servant:
david

This poem is really great; you got me reading it over and over. The flow and the wordings in this poem is really good. your a really good writer. keep on doing it.

-Jaime :)