Dhaval - This is truly beautiful - So rich in imagery and feeling

I love this- the unique words and phrasing, it's almost sing-song quality, the images, the mood and milieu it creates, the capture of all the human senses, the way it can be interpreted by each individual reader yet has a universal meaning. The last stanza is great. Excellent poem.

Peace, Poetry & Power,

Gary Jurechka

This was added to my favorites, for I loved it. it was very well detailed but then again, it wasn't boring at all :)

Marjan

I love your style of writing it was veryyy nice:) 5/5

I had to read this at least three times before I could comment on it. It has utterly confounded me. It's so beautiful with your choice of words that you rarely ever see. It flows beautifully off the tounge and it reaches deep inside and touches the senses. I know and understand there is a meaning behind it. I'm just not sure what, I can't quite seem to put my finger on it. And yet I'm almost afraid to read too deeply into it and ruin the magic spell this poem creates around the reader. It's a beautiful poem that has an air of mystery and leaves the reader guessing. The fact that it is about fortune and chance, yet rising up and falling down is simply unique. Your words are flitting around my head in ways that I can't seem to understand. It's a truly amazing poem. 5/5 seems to be a shame to give it, but alas it's all I have to offer. You seem to be an amazingly deep person with a talent as deep as your emotions go. Don't ever stop writing. I look forward to reading more of your work Dhavel. Awesome job

Much Love,
.:Danielle:.

This poem expresses the exact feeling I try to portray in a poem that I am writing currently, which I can't seem to get right. Anywho, I thought this was an awesome poem start to finish, with an apparent, and beautiful strength behind the words of this poem. This was truly an imagination-freeing poem, which is going on my favs.

Thank you for writing this poem, it will help me exceed with my limitations of imaginative beauty.

Take care,

Richie