Comments : Dandy Weed (Haiku)

  • 16 years ago

    by Corinne

    I'm very fond of dandelions too :-)

  • 16 years ago

    by Melissa

    Now this is the perfect haiku! I LOVE IT! Very rarely am I captured by a haiku, but I am captivated by this one. AWESOME! ;o)

    *My favorite piece by you for sure.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    Very creative piece of poetry. Haiku is a unique type and you have added so much meaning in it with the very precise words. Tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Such well-designed and graceful beauty emanated by your words have thoroughly enchanted me. In all truth, prior to the appearance of this lovely piece, I never have truly enjoyed Haiku's. It's amazing to note how someone remarkable as you still adores simple pleasures in life.

    Best wishes.

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Creative penned! Dear, there are nothing to say here.... simply yet perfect written! Hugs....Bert.

  • 16 years ago

    by Verity Han

    Not only have you gotten the number of syllables correct (amazing compared to my classmates...) but you get your point across easily. Keep it up, keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow, it is really beautiful, short but so powerful. Well done! I love this one, wonderful atmosphere.