Comments : I miss you...

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Neo
    What a sad yet beautiful piece you have penned.

    I can feel your bliss and pain,
    I know when you lose and gain.
    I will forget you never,
    Cause your heart beats in me forever...

    What an awesome stanza. The emotions speak so strongly from these lines.
    Excellent job!
    Love Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueDreams

    Beautiful write, even though sad, but you expressive them within beautiful emotions. The last stanza remain me somewhere for someone... Love realizes and accepts that there will be disagreements and disturbing emotions... There may be times when miles lay between, but love is a commitment. It believes, and endures all things. beautifully done!

  • 16 years ago

    by Marjan

    Neo,
    You have such a beautiful heart my friend. I think that's what makes your poems beautiful.
    take care,
    Marjan

  • 16 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Aww, such a sad poem! It is a beautiful one though. The part where you said her heart will foverer beat in yours really touched me. I have a special someone too and I feel exactly the same way about him, he will forever be deep inside my heart.

    Keep writing!

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 16 years ago

    by Melody Christina

    Beautifully penned poem! ...the rhyme is nice.. I loved your style! 5/5..
    ...Melody..=)