This was so sad but wonderfuly written n its so deep..luvd it!

5/5 Brilliant use of words. Im adding you to my favourite authors list, really loved this poem.

Beautiful but sad poem i luved it!!!! keep up da gud wurk!!!!!
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Excellent poem ,very sad but wonderfully written with a lot pain, vocabulary was great and full of painful feelings, great job ,keep it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5

"TIME IS TOO CRUEL" LIFE IS TOO SHORT" THESEA ARE WORDS I LIVE BY....THANK YOU FOR SHARING...GREAT POEM FULL OF EMOTIONS. 5/5 READ MY LATEST "MY TEARS"

Your feeling of loneliness and helplessness is felt in your write, but know that things can change overtime if you are willing to ask for help. May your heart be filled with peace and joy you seek one day soon.

sadaddy
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That poem is for a lot of people, many feel that way

Beautiful poems you penned here, even though sad but but well expressive emotions... "For you cannot live in someone else. You cannot find yourself in someone else. You cannot be given a life by someone else. Of all the people you will know in a lifetime, you are the only one you will never leave nor lose. To the question of your life, you are the only answer. To the problems of your life, you are the only solution. anyway, keep your head up high and believe me there are have for tomorrow,...have a good day, keep writing it will help you and thanks for you nice comment, much appreciated, take care.

Awesome!!i like it ;)

So beautiful and deep! 5/5

Thats so sad but kewl 5/5

Another great poem wow...^_^ i love it 5/5

ME yR beuuterflY oN youR poemS, i reallY appreciatE yR writingS verY mucH, theY giveS pleasurE.

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I think we all play the Game, but there is Hope in the Heart> Excellent and Provoking thought.
Peace and Blessings

I like dis poem keep it up

Wow, love it, sad, but i love it:) 5/5
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BEAuuutifull poem.. rhymes make it more attractive.. especially the topic you chose was soo good.. i like the second stanza the best.. really gr8..

Sad.
yet i like it

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Raw and truthful
the flow is not too bad aswell

i realllly like the first 2 stanzas :D

It's never late! I like very much :) 5/5