This is a great poem...keep up the good work

EmilySarah

Thats really good 5/5 ^_^
~*~Skye~*~

Thats really good 5/5 ^_^
~*~Skye~*~

This is another amazing write from you Andrew! I seriously ADORE the whole concept that you're talking to your reflection, and that you save that build up to the very end...

"you bathe in your self pity
knowing you'll never be clean"

I love those lines!!! They're definetly the highlight of this entire poem, keep writing hun, don't ever give up!

This is beautifully written and yet heartbreaking at the same time.
I loved the depth and emotion you put into this write, it made for a very intense read, and I thought the ending stanza made for a stunning end.

Wow, this poem is amazing... I take back what I wrote before... this is my favorite of your poems... good work... The words are great... everything is just amazing about this poem... you can really picture it all, it's just very sad, you can see the person described... well done :-)

This is phenominal! I love everything about it. I wouldn't change a thing. It's written so smooth, so well. 5/5 Keep it up

Amazing poem

You can really feel the frustration and dissapointment in this poem. You created a peice with great depth and emotion. I was drawn in from this first line to the last. I loved how it ended, it was perfect. Pretty much flawless. 5/5

marcella

Best poem I've read yet on this site. Why have you stopped writing?! you're amazingly talented