I really like this poem...i wrote one kind of similar but yet different in ways aswell...keep up the gr8 writes
bree

Aww it was well written .. and sad too the ending brought the poem all together really well. and th flow was good. great job
rates&comments always apprechiated
Kirsty
xx

I love it. 5 outta 5. great job, keep it up. I'm the same way, i tend to keep things inside too. so i can really relate