I'm Pretty Sure

by Andrew Morton   Jul 9, 2007


I'm pretty sure i'm always right
with these twisted thoughts im thinking of
so ill stick to this point of view
forever lost in this state of mind

i'm pretty sure i'm winning the fight
with these battles between myself
these feelings of remorse are few
yeah, i'm really one of a kind

theres no one to lay beside these nights
but i'm not begging for someone else
there's very little that i can't do
keeping conflict right out of sight

i'll be good, just don't turn on the light
cause i'm enjoying the darkness
i know what the world wants to see soon
so i'm going to lay here in spite

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wrote this one back in april

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  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You write and sound a lot like me! 5/5 This is very good!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I frikken love this...
    The imagery you portrayed in this piece was beautifully done, it created very vivid pictures for me, I thought flow was flawless throughout the entire piece, and I thought every line was very intense and full of power...you did a beautiful job on this piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Andrew
    Nice job on this piece. A really diffrent kind of poem. I like it :)

    i'm pretty sure i'm winning the fight
    with these battles between myself
    these feelings of remorse are few
    yeah, i'm really one of a kind

    It would be nice if everyone could see therselves this way. It would be such a nice world to live in.
    Great job Andrew.
    Take Care Cindy