Comments : I'm Pretty Sure

  • 16 years ago

    by Cindy

    Andrew
    Nice job on this piece. A really diffrent kind of poem. I like it :)

    i'm pretty sure i'm winning the fight
    with these battles between myself
    these feelings of remorse are few
    yeah, i'm really one of a kind

    It would be nice if everyone could see therselves this way. It would be such a nice world to live in.
    Great job Andrew.
    Take Care Cindy

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    I frikken love this...
    The imagery you portrayed in this piece was beautifully done, it created very vivid pictures for me, I thought flow was flawless throughout the entire piece, and I thought every line was very intense and full of power...you did a beautiful job on this piece.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gasttlee

    You write and sound a lot like me! 5/5 This is very good!