A Ripple In Time (Haiku)

by Ashleigh Skye   Jul 9, 2007


Bound by endless roots,
the once emerald leaves turn red,
destined to crumble.

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PLEASE COMMENT AND VOTE THANKS A LOT

*haiku: three lines; the first line has 5 syllables, the second has 7 syllables and the third has 5 syllables*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Timothy r

    I loved this poem so much, Haiku is really a fun form, and you did it exquisitely. Timothy r

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    You wrote it beautifully, you created wonderful atmosphere with just a few words! Well done! Imagery is also great,5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by ChaosKiller69

    I enjoyed this poem it was very well written and very nice train of thought on this piece. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Angie

    Quite powerful for so few words, well done.

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Oh. An interesting title for such a Haiku.

    I choose to believe you were talking about the turning of the seasons.. and if so, you did such a job explaining it in three mere lines!
    The imagery spoke to me, immediately putting pictures of Fall into my head. Beautiful.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

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