I thought this was great! I don't get why the absurd "3" vote. Hmm guess they don't know a good poem when they read it.

Very nice haiku, excellent wording!

It's a very sad poem. But beautiful, nonetheless

I love this...very sad and yet so beautifully written at the same time.
You managed to put a lot of emotion and power in this piece...well done.

I think this is great, makes sense, and the imagery is awesome.

Ah, beautiful haiku! This poem doesn't deserve to be down voted! I really love your opening line - keep up the good work!

Great haiku! i love it! its so beautiful! i love haiku's! ^_^ 5/5 i love the last line...O.O
keep it up!
never loose that talent! ^_^
check out sum of my poems plz!
~*~Skye~*~

It's deep.. very nice :D I like the directness being present... the portrayal of an inevitable future..
Regards Arun.

Oh. An interesting title for such a Haiku.

I choose to believe you were talking about the turning of the seasons.. and if so, you did such a job explaining it in three mere lines!
The imagery spoke to me, immediately putting pictures of Fall into my head. Beautiful.

xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

Quite powerful for so few words, well done.

I enjoyed this poem it was very well written and very nice train of thought on this piece. 5/5

You wrote it beautifully, you created wonderful atmosphere with just a few words! Well done! Imagery is also great,5/5

I loved this poem so much, Haiku is really a fun form, and you did it exquisitely. Timothy r