I actually wrote a poem similar to this. That aside, this is excellent! 5/5

Wow this was a sad poem but you did a great job writing it.
wow i cant believe this really happened. i'm glad to know you are okay.
i never heard of such a thing happening.
keep on writing hun 5/5

~Kristina

This is certainly heartwrenching...I love the depth and emotion you put into this, it is very easily sensed by the reader.
The imagery portrayed was wonderfully done, creates vivid pictures.
Beautiful work and I hope you are feeling better.