Sad topic but a great poem. This, I believe, every teenager including myself has felt but I have never been able to put words to it. Great job and you have an interesting rhyme scheme. Keep writing, your good!

Wow. . .that was very good and inspiring(sp?). but what i loved most about it was the flow. . .great jod
auna

Amazing Poem, Your Really Good At Writting :D

I love this! maybe it will work out this way for me too...luv ya.

<33 Tonya

I love your poem 5