Your really captured you feelings in this peice. And what an awesome way to vent.
It turned out great.
lol I could completly relate to what you said.
A truth filled read.
Elaine.

Honestly this poem is great!! I love the very TRUE emotions... I can TOTALLY relate to the feelings you share in it... like you just want to deal with the situation in your own way... own time and no1 understands that... This poem is very good and very relatable.. I'm giving you a 5/5! Take care and I hope everythings well with you!

I loved it...it was great, and you completely expressed your feelings and told everyone to bite you basically if they don't like these kinds of poems.

Yes I am talking about him
He was my everything
I struggle not to think of him
I strive not to dream of him

Though these lines seem to have a mono rhyme, they are wonderful. The image created in the mind after reading these lines are very lucid. I liked the fow of words and emotions. 5/5 keep it up :)

With love
Fsams

I do like to read freee verse poems that just express honest emotion that flow straight from the heart. This poem reflects on the passion that drives us crazy,while addressing its readers to tell it like it is.

I can relate alot to it. yooh can feel the emotion yooh put into the piece. well done. 5/5

Lol i hate it when people are like you didnt use full stops and commas and that its a poem on a website! its not a letter to the president of the world lol well i like it and the careless attitude :)

A piece full of honest emotions and put together well...sometimes you have to just write for you and release what dwells within...beautifully written and pieced together well...

Excellent poem...