It would have been better if you wrote it. =P

Lol, jk, jk... I know you wrote it...

well, now I'm lying.. I hate liars... thats so gay... Dude, once my ex boyfriend told me he was gonna go to "work" when I freaking walked in on him screwing some other girl. Isn't that crap?

Sorry about my last comment... was a little... stupid there. lol.

I love this one. It is so sad and it is just perfect. I dont know how but it just sparks something in me and it is just so sad. This is a poem, in my opinion, if I ever saw one. One worthy of an EXELLENT!

GREAT! I rarely say that about a poem hehe...5/5 I love it

To me her heart flowers
Then came withering hours
The light, darkness devours
Then still, lies my flowers

Beautifully written, but the rhymes are typical. I like the repetition of the title in the end.