Comments : JUST ONE MORE DAY WITH YOU

  • 16 years ago

    by SarahhJayy

    Good Poem 5/5

    Except I Think You Need To Chnage The Bottom
    I miss you more and more each day
    There is so much more we had to say
    Hopefully We WIll Be Back Together Soon
    I Miss You As Far As The Moon

    Or Somthing

    x

  • 16 years ago

    by BrittanyLouise

    5/5 Excellent rhyme. Good content.