Nice poem its pretty good!!! i like it.. you should read mine soem time!! :)

This is my favorite! It makes me feel better when I read it. <3

I thought this was beautifully written and yet heartbreaking at the same time...you managed to pack a lot of emotion and depth into a relatively short piece...well done.

No more lies!!!!!!!*lol*I really like this poem.It was short but to the point.5/5^-^

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I like this piece: It is short but very meaningful. I can relate to it, it sounds similar to some poems I wrote. The greatest power of this piece is in its simplicity and the honesty that you put into words.
Well done, 5/5 from me.

I actually feel you in because I go through this! 5/5

This poem has amazing atmosphere and you wrote it greatly. Short but still very powerful! Ending is very effective. I like it very much, it really deserves 5/5