You're Perfect

by Sara   Jul 12, 2007


Talking to you
Brightens my day
No matter how I feel
You always make it okay

One flash of that smile
One gaze into those eyes
One touch of our lips
No more tears I have to cry

They say we're too young
To feel this way
But then why do I
Think about him everyday?

Having you tell me
How you really feel
Makes me know this isn't a dream
That all this is real

They say the greatest thing you'll ever learn
Is how to love and be loved in return
And I knew that statement was true
On that day, that day I met you

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  • 15 years ago

    by Silently He walks

    Alot of your poems speak of love. I assume you've had many prosperous relationship. Much joy and much sorrow. It makes the right person that much more worth while because of all that you've endured to get to that position in your life. great write just as I suspected sara 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by L0VE iS LiKE HEAVEN BUT HURTS LiKE HELL

    Awwwww i love this poem its beautiful.. :]

  • 16 years ago

    by Tiller

    Hmm, I decided to comment your poem and get another one on mine =) Lol again, you really are a good writer. I mean, I can relate to this again. But who can't? Lol I bet you out of every 100 people who read this, 98 of them can relate to it. =P Good job Sara.

  • 16 years ago

    by Karl Wild GG23

    Love has no age limits but kids are ready to say I love you way to soon, you really did a great job with this poem. The Flow is great and the imagery as well, very heartfelt just like the others. Great job 5/5 GG23

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    Simple but beautiful =) Well done :) It was straight to the point, it flowed nicely too. :) The ending is really good. I love it :) I think everyone who is in love can relate to this poem.

    5/5! keep up the fantastic work!

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