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Nice love it lol ........................... thanks for the comment
by Marc Ortiz
It was a good poem :) very unique - keep writing :)
Nice it was a great poem... you got a gift in poetry 5/5 and keep writing on
What a diffrent piece you have penned. Always a good message from you :)
Take Care Cindy
Good poem it is different from alot of poems i have seen on this site lol but it is still great :):) thx for the comment also
Interesting to read.....makes one think! Good job....Debbie
Havnt really read anthything like it, great poem to, good job loved it and i cant wait to read more from you
by MicHaEL iS SaVinG ThE DaY
Wow its a nice poem. i really like it. keep up the good work. and thanks for the comment =)
by Tricky Daze
It was so interesting by all the lines..But I especially liked the ending..It really hit
Just like opportunity,
we build nationality.Good job,
Amazging job! i like how it flows so well! =]] great write <3
by Reapers ZeitGeiSt
Very great style and good use of language...well done :)
Loved reading it
Simple and very interesting.
keep it up!
Ooh, this is nice. Especially for someone like me, living in a different country than I'm from. It's great. Very emotional, but easy to get through because of it's simplicity.
by Dark Secrets
Thats soo true .. here u proved that as long as we act like a nation we don't need any papers to prove it! All we need is each other.
That's differently nice ;D