My Sweet Rose {Acrostic}

This poem I have read once before. Truely a beautiful piece. It is on my favorite poems as I loved it so much. I had never seen an acrostic which held repetition so it really caught my attention. The emotion portrayed was astonishing. I honestly can't say how heartfelt this piece was for me. Delicate. Well done. 5/5. ~Mel

This poem I have read once before. Truely a beautiful piece. It is on my favorite poems as I loved it so much. I had never seen an acrostic which held repetition so it really caught my attention. The emotion portrayed was astonishing. I honestly can't say how heartfelt this piece was for me. Delicate. Well done. 5/5. ~Mel

Stumbling on your thorns--
With what hope is there left;
Eternity doesn't seem that long..
Eventually you'll realize you're alone.
There. Doesn't that feel better?

Wow great, Acrostic style is totally present in this piece. Very well penned and well written. 5/5 all the way

Stumbling on your thorns--
With what hope is there left;
Eternity doesn't seem that long..
Eventually you'll realize you're alone.
There. Doesn't that feel better?

Wow great, Acrostic style is totally present in this piece. Very well penned and well written. 5/5 all the way

When i first read the title for this poem, I must admit that I was expecting something along the lines of someone speaking of close loved one that they had lost to suicide. Haha, you fooled me and probably many others. I enjoy that your title in itself is a mockery of the true meaning of your poem. The flow was beautiful as were the words you conveyed to help bring out the intentions of your poem. I do think that this poem would be better if read aloud though. Great write.

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