Tis a very good poem, love the way your poems are like stories, i give it a perfect 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

ALTHOUGH I AM MAD AT BRYAN FORHAVING FIRST COMMENT :makes angry face at him: i have to agree this is another good poem jenna. deffinataly in the top of yours. i loveee them. your a brilliant writer so stop putting yourself down :(

You've described the story really well 5/5 good poem