Excellent work, I love how you compared the whole thing to nature. It's all an absolutely amazing piece, probably one of my favorites! nice job!

5/5

A beautiful write it had some lovely imagery this got a very well deserved 5 only two things I would like to mention the flow of this poem was exceptional except for this line “This beautiful girl, to me, was the one” it was thrown off a little here and it may have been better split in to a couple of stanzas just some thoughts.

Wow, i love the way you described everything, it was very well done. 5/5

Absolutly, well they all took my words that i wanted to say... you write such cool poems..

This is a beautiful well written poem astromomiical imagery and excellent flow

intense passionate romance

This poem was so clever. Everything about it was great. The imagery is perfect and made what you were feeling so clear. The words you used were simple but powerful at the same time. I think you did a lovely job with this poem. Can't wait to read more. Nik

This was a very well sentimental verse that captured the readers heart. Fantastic write, but like my other comments, I'd like to see punctuation in this piece. Other than that, this was an outstanding write. Keep up the great work.

Peace, Joe

This poem was absolutely magnificent. The flow and rhyme were absolutely perfect, making it easier to read. The emotion while not directly expressed was easily understandable through your creative metaphors.

"But she dropped a boulder on top of my world,
And left a crater, my eternal scar. "

^These two lines really stood out for me. It was a perfect ending to this, the way you were still able to relte to nature in describing how she broke your heart. How it would remain there, hurting forever.

A fantastic write. Well Done x)