Comments : World of War

  • 16 years ago

    by NIDAL

    Good poem..vivid and compeling...thank you for sharing....5/5 vote and comment on my latest "I am" " My Doubts" "gifts of sorrow"

  • 16 years ago

    by Kristina

    Wow this is very good. it's a different type of poem, so i like it a lot. theres is not something everyone writes about ,it's original so great job for that! it flowed nicely. 5/5

    ~Kristina

  • 16 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    Do you think they'll one day begin to see
    That they're singing to a toxic melody?
    [[I Love the toxic melody part.]]

    And excuse me, but damn.
    So much truth and emotion in one poem; brilliant!
    I love how you penned this. I could feel you telling it to me like a story, and almost crying near the end. Crazy.

    Anyways.
    I LOVE that the first and last stanza were my favorites. That's like 1000 points right there. They were so strong and held a lot of truth; nicely done.

    xTheEcstasyofSuicidex 5.5

  • 16 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    I really like the opening line of the poem, I like the imagery created in this poem, good job. It flowed nicely, good choice of words.

    That they're singing to a toxic melody?
    ^^I really like that line, well done.

    Keep up the good work!

  • 16 years ago

    by X2892

    I like the imagery created in this poem, good job
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by CompletelyIncomplete

    This is really a cute poem and the meaning and the content is great. I would say this is your best work :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Leah20

    I actually liked this poem. I liked the message conveyed, and the way you conveyed it. The only thing I could see where an improvement could be made is maybe in using stronger adjectives on your next poems, it definently adds another dimension to poetry.