The One I Love.

by BeautifulxMess   Jul 14, 2007


I have more than what I've ever asked for.
I've waited forever for my heart to feel this way.
Such a shame that I avoided this closed door.
And never knew what it would bring to me today.

A thousand red roses won't dry away my tears.
Chocolates in a box won't take away the pain.
But your arms will drift away my biggest fears.
And your kisses will clear the stormy rain.

My heart will only beat for you when your around.
The reasons that I'm here are there in your heart.
You guided me the way to lift me off the ground.
And you helped me believe that I can escape the dark.

For all the times you were there to catch my fall.
I can't help but thinking that your an angel sent from above.
Your perfect skin is what makes you my all.
And no matter how my life ends, you'll always be the one I love.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Awww...i have to say...this is one of the best love poems that i've read in a very long time... kudos to you.=]

    the second stanza was brilliant. nice work. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ohh..I don't even know what to say...

    I LOVE this...the emotion and depth you portrayed in this piece were beautifully done, very easily sensed by the reader, flow was perfect throughout and I thought the opening was beautiful with each stanza thereafter just getting better and better.

  • 16 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    You had wonderful flow, and vocabulary, nice form. All of the things i look for.
    I infact enjoyed this on many levels.
    I've read some of your other work, and you have remarkable talent.
    Keep all of it up.

    Isaac.
    (Ian)

  • 16 years ago

    by ABake

    This was beautiful.
    Your flow was so smooth and your emotion was deep and touching as the others said.
    Your portray your love so easily and with such simple wording.
    Great job!
    5/5

    XxAmberxX

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    This is a superb poem with great flow of feelings and expressions of pure love and affection. I loved the total poem. tc

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