Of all the people who visited, i can't believe no one said anything! first off, you definatly have great writing skills, for sure (i'm the sports editor for my school paper, and i must say i'm jealous), and also (somethin i gotta add), if your life was pointless, you would have never been born. i don't know if you believe in God, but he doesn't make junk and allow it to stay...

Very sad and dark! Excellent! 5/5

This is a wonderful write. i loved every word. very detailed and very emotional. the las two lines i loved the most. a wonderful job. keep it up!