That one kiss

by JaMeS   Jul 14, 2007


Its happened
that moment you've wished for
the moment to sweep her off her feet
so long now has this urge been suppressed
your mind races you cant believe its now
you take her hand
its like a great connection has just sparked into action
you can feel what she feels
a shiver has just exploded through her body
she's been waiting too
you hold her closer
she's now entranced
entranced in your eyes even the deep breaths you take
she tingles all over and the warmth of your bodies entwined, pressed together makes her weak at the knees
but its OK your holding her remember
you move your lips closer nearer hers
they ever so gently touch
like a subtle light rain or winter sunrise
she feels it too the uncontrollable emotion
you kiss her, the world could fall around you just wouldn't care
its there the explosion of lust
and as your hands caress each other
the moment you'd been waiting for arrives
as you whisper in her ear telling her you've felt this so long
your awaken to realize she's still not yours

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  • 16 years ago

    by taylor

    U amaze me.

    xoxTaylor

  • 16 years ago

    by CrazyCowLady

    I ove it cept for the sad bit at the end that happened to me =(

  • 16 years ago

    by Mousie

    Omg that gave me goosebumps! i remember that feeling, thank you, i just relived that moment, it was beautiful. you worded it so carefully and so descriptively, it flowed beautifully and just rolled right off the tongue, wonderful job.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlashLove

    Great! I do not have better words for this gorgeous creation!

  • 16 years ago

    by tears i cry

    Thats so sweet and the ending is kind of sad it almost made me shed a tear 5/5 for a truly inspiring piece