Love your poem real sweet i hope you win you are a very talented writer and i really enjoy reading your work and commenting 5/5 Steve

All i have to say is WOW!!! your an awesome writer!! i realy could feel the emotion!! keep it up!
amanda

Interesting poem, though I'm not entirely sure if the message was clear enough for some of us more daft readers haha.

I suppose the rest of the Auzzies are out there drinking and dmaging bain cells instead of writing poetry!

Not much to add to this poem, probably might have used the word Void instead of 'hole in the ground' for a more poetic effect :).