Excellent poem, i like the title xxxx

Great poem , exciting and thrilling wording was really good and it was wonderfully written, full of surprises and the flow was good , great job, a pleasure to read ,keep it up your friend Tracy d

I just love this poem. From the first time I read it in the discussion I loved it. Your wording is amazing and the overall point of the poem was very good, keep it up Dear.

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