Wow this is so great! i absolutely loved it! it flowed so nicely together. you did a wonderful job writing it. 5/5

~Kristina

Great poem.
Enjoyed reading it.
Take care

I really love our poem!!
it turned out so great.
i'm glad we got the idea..and wrote it. :)
maybe we should write more together..
we'll see! =]
--Viola

This is a good poem

Wow...this is like a really great poem i mean the flow and rhyme and just everything made it so enjoyable to read *one of my favorites* keep it up <33

Beautifully written.
I love every stanza.
Great choice of words.
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I love this one....personal favorite. i like your choice of words, wonderful!
keep it up
<3

'I don't know how to let go
But I can't hold on anymore'

Loved this poem, well done to both of you!
x

Wow, this is really good. I felt this way with my Ex I'm still addicted to him. Loved it Great Write!

-SS

'I don't know how to let go
But I can't hold on anymore'

Best lines! Really great write !