Another very well written poem... I loved the emotion and the flow... though some didn't seem to fit...I still loved it ^_^ keep on writing, I look forward to reading more of your work... And I loved the ending

losing the cards that you were delt
everything that you held in your hands
feeling lost in everything you felt
finding reason in all that you can

Great poem i like it a lot, 5/5

Another great poem by you. It flowed nicely, I like your choice of words.

Just a suggestion to use punctuations. xD But you don't have to if you don't like :)

5/5!

Andrew
You are becoming very good with your formed poems :)

Great job!
Take Care Cindy

Of all your poems I've read this ones is my favorite. I love it... especially the line about losing the cards you were dealt... it's just a great line with great imagery... nice work! :-)

Very powerfully worded poem. The lexis used in this piece are very strong and appropriate. I loved the nice rhymes and the style. It is well structured and flowing well. 5/5 all the way

Fsams

Another wonderful poem, and yet again i loved the style. fantastic job, i look forward to seeing your new works.

Excellent poem ANDREW very well written and some what different from your normal writing,love the word choice you used wonderful job,, your friend Tracy d,,,,,5/5