Wow that was beautiful and very well written ,deep , but extremely good, great job ,keep up the good work, your friend Tracy d 5/5

Debbie
Beautiful piece.

Tears spilled in wanton abandon
Unnoticed
Drops upon an infinite lake
As time
Friend or foe?
Gleefully counted by number
Outlining my heart
Tracing my life

The countdown is getting lower everyday.
Excellent job!
Love Cindy

Debbie you are awesome

I love dove chocolate........

Wow! How touching and beautiful! 5/5

Debbie, what a beautiful penned once again you portrait here, such a unique style writing... marvelous!!

Words may be mild and fair but the tone may pierce like a dart; Words may be soft as the summer air but the tone may break the heart; For works come from the mind, grow by study and art, But tone leaps from the inner self, revealing the state of the heart.

Have a good day! an talk with you again soon, be safe, Bert.

I dont think i am smart enough to undertand this i like plain simple poems, but your language is great and i am drunk

I really liked the metaphoric analogy of how the sexual experience is no different than eating chocolate...at least that what I got from this. Did I over think it?

...extremely well written. pablo would be proud....

I loved this. The title, the whole thing just drew me in. Don't know what to say. I wish I could write a poem like this. A truly amazing write. 5/5. Never stop.

` Liz =]

Wow, again. This was a huge metaphorical poem written in such a classy manner. Very, very poignant to say the least. <3 Keep them coming, ma'am!

Very clever mother. I do love your writing and I do love chocolate!!!!!

So metaphorical and creative. Love is dimentional and your poems create really beautiful, mournful, romantic etc etc impressions.

Love your poems
Fsams

Simply Superb .. Loved It .. a woo-hoo :P

~Wake~

Huh? i guess i'm simple i just really did not understand but thanks for sharing your beautiful words.

Wow...
I actually have tears in my eyes... This is endlessly touching and I can relate to this stunning poem on so many levels.
Whole metaphor within this piece is fantastic, and I am honestly left in awe.
Brilliant piece of sad poetry, filled with so many excellently expressed emotions. I like the imagery that you portrayed, too.
This poem brings me back some memories and that made it so captivating for me.
Superbly done.