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by Miranda   Jul 18, 2007


I want you, I need you,
but you don't have a clue.
I want you to know how I feel,
with a kiss I want you to seal,
this very time,this lovely moment,
but the message has not been sent.

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This is the first poem I ever wrote.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    Great job! awesome!

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    Wow first poem huh? my first poem sucked...anyway this poem kicks butt for a first....i think you have a lot of potential keep it up ill be looking forward to the next ones!!

    @: P

  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    Rado! lol this poem still makes my heart skip:P It's amazing, Rofl! my first poem sucked. lol like I dunno I started out with the acrosstic's.
    lol Awesome job Mirandy!
    xoxoxo
    Elaine.

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