Remember 7:17

by blueknight   Jul 18, 2007


Remember 7:17

It was seven seventeen
Remember its raining
While I'm proposing
While we're eating

My knees where shaking
My heart beats was racing
I can't impede on smiling
On the seven seventeenth

The sweetest day
When you finally say yes!
The very first day
We walk on the rain

Remember that time
While you are holding my arms
With small step on the path
So we can maximize the time

That was a beautiful day
That's why I wrote this letter
Remember while we're talking
Remember while I'm propagating-

what is it I'm feeling,
Remember the promises,
behind the promise ring
Always remember me, my girl friend.

That day I want to shout
I feel like I'm crying
Deep inside my heart
I want to hug you tight

I want to tell the whole world
That you are my love
Now that I know you are mine
I'll do everything, just to see your smile

Remember while we're walking
Remember that, it was raining
And that could be our blessing
Remember that day seven, seventeen

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  • 16 years ago

    by Finalgravedigger

    Wow that poem made me smile you should feel accomplished not many poems make me smile well except for funny poems lol 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Debbie

    Urrrgh, stop being cheesy, hun! It's too sweet! Haha. Glad to know you received a sweet 'yes' from your little darling, huh. So am I not authorized to call you honey now? :( I hope not. ;D Ha!

    Best wishes, anyway. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Rose not your average

    The title is very unique i like it so is the poem. it was great!

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The romantic remembering of a climactic moment is intense and the delivery is smooth

    I was looking for you in the line When finally say yes! When you finally say yes! but my word processor has no problem with it so I must be tired. I enjoyed this one

  • 16 years ago

    by Hope

    The title in itself is catchy.. And I love the way in which you structured the poem.. I especially love these lines "My knees where shaking
    My heart beats was racing
    "