I REALLY FEEL EVERY PART OF YOUR POEM I LIKE THE WAY IT ENDED FEEL FREE TO TAKE A QUICK PEEK AT MINE

This was so deep and somewhat dark. I really liked it, especially how the ending was like finding redemption and freeing yourself. Beautiful.

This was a really good poem and it touch me alot... your free to look a mine

Wow this is an awsome way to write out the feelings.. slowly and deeply DON'T STOP WRITEING! 5/5
-Marina

Very deep and disgusting

WOWWWWWWWWWWWW imean
WOWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
you are without a doubt queen of dakness
you really scare me I wish you were in
my life in the real world In the sun lite world
the world we call reality. I've like to talk
face to face your poem a 5 of course my
depth for dark poems only goes so far but
i know good writting when i see it .
you're always in my head cy

Twisted, but nice, but not the story, obviously, but rather the creation of the piece. Most of the poem had a good flow, although there were parts that were a little messy, I feel, but the rhymes were good. Great story telling.

Brad