To all my poem i maid i never try to made poetry of life... very nice... i like it...

Wow, that's awesome that you would write about that. watching my friends cut, i really don't see a point in it, either. very well written.

I Love this poem.. Thanks for sending the message that self mutilation or suicide is not cool. I have seen a few dark poems, yes some of them are good in terms of style and language but I'm glad that some has the sense to see that its all so wrong..
I especially love this stanza "Why do you write words with blood?
Then act like a stud.
Whats your story?
Youre not going to get glory." 5/5

Well written... keep it up

A bit cheesy, lol. But I like it. The thing is people don't cut because they want to die and it doesn't mean they want to commit suicide. They just want to release some of the pain they're in. No one want to die, only to escape immense pain.

I think the rhyming is a bit rushed with the aabb pattern, I think this poem would flow very nicely if you changed it to the ABAB pattern.
Maybe if you used a little more detail then the aabb pattern would work, but it just seems a bit short for that because most of your lines have 2-5 words in it.
I like the story though.

This one caught my eye i liked it i know where you are coming from cutting is pointless...trust me...i know....always Manda

Very interesting poem. It is too similar with first part but atmosphere in this one is excellent too. I don't like some lines but except few words this poem is great.

This is very deep and powerful, fulled with emotions. I like the way you wrote it, I could feel your emotions in every stanza, and you used punctuation greatly. This is my favorite one from you. The topic is good, too.