Wow, this poem is wonderful. You have something about you that just gives this piece energy and life, without over doing it. I like how there's style, flow, rhythm, and rhyme, but none of it overpowers other bits. You have perfectly balanced a fantastic piece and it just fits together so wonderfully. Your voice is clear, yet stays hidden too in a way. All in all, this piece is magnificent and definitely worthy of a 5/5 and I hope to go and read more of your works soon.
This poem was such a blessing to me becuase untill this moment i have previously decided to stop writing but u are right God gave me a gift maybe not as abundently as he gave you LOL=) but none the less a gift and its up to me to use if for his glory. Reach the broken and show them the hope in Christ. Thank you sincerly.