Gem
Welcome back :) Missed reading your work. What a great peom to come back with. Excellent job! I know the hidden twist but don't want to ruin it for everyone else :)
Glad your back :)
Love Cindy

You've done it again honey.
I knew you still had it in you!
I love you.
Marcus

Great poem!

Yah! Gem's back! Lol! Everyone truly has missed your work girl, and this poem proves why. Such deep words and the imagry was fantastic. :) I mean that sick feeling that you described her having I could feel. Amazing job! :)
~Midnight Sun

Great poem Gem!
I love the way your words flow, and how you portrayed your emotions so perfectly!
I hope to see more work from you!
5/5
((Amber))

Oh it's good to hear that your back!!Anyways about your poem I did guessed it but don't know if it is right or wrong!!Lol!!Anyways take care of yourself!!
Have fun = )

Extremely well written and I just awoke so I won't guess at the twist until my second pot of coffee is on...

Gem,
very good poem. it's refreshing to see a good piece. your writing is superb and i loved this poem. The rhyming was well and the vocabulary was strong. nice work
5/5
*kaila*

That was really moving. excellent use of words. i liked the storyline very well written. xx

Omg she writes again :)))
oh be still be beating heart, otherwise this adredaline will kill me :)) sure was worth the wait :)) i hope alls good or getting better :)) and as always 5/5 :))

I love this!
This is beautifully and elegantly written, and a beautiful poem to come back with after being absent from writing so long.
Beautiful work.

Yikes... in a good way.
WoW, totally awesome!
loved it.

nunny

Wonderful writing! 5/5

I miss you and your lovely works, m'dear. Glad to see you posting again. :] It was enjoyable to read. Honest. It even flowed rather effortlessly throughout; plus, its universal content is worthy of note. I utterly adored it! All the best and take care.
Love,
Debbie

Wow... tht was great!!... =)

First of all the title is great just what everyone wants to read about. The poem was great even though some parts i felt could be better but it was great, good job.

Wonderful Gem....better than ever! Love it.....great topic...and even greater delivery! All the best, Debbie

Amazing poem Gem! New kinda story line for you. My friend on here did that same title...hers is a different story then yours, but still very good. It's cool to see how two people can interpret it differently. I really enjoyed the flow and rhyme. It was a very, very good poem!!!
:) Charisma*

Hey...i really loved that poem...im pritty shore i got the twist, but just in case i didnt, can u message me with the answer? i loved the way you wrote that

Amazing Gem! Beautifully written and the twist at the end really caught me. I'm glad that you are writing again. What a fantastic poem to come back with! 5/5 for sure!!

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