I don't even want to interrupt the good feelings this poem delivers with little editing faux pas.....

I think you will be happy to know that this piece shows unequivocally what a true romantic idealist you are...Good for you!...drink plenty of spring water...;-)

It was a great poem, I like the language use in this piece, good job. Flow was good, I like the opening stanza I think it really grabs the reader's attention, good job.

My favorite lines would be..
Because you're the reason
my life is filled with music.
^^ I find that really sweet.

5/5